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Work in progress- the writing shed, days 3 to 6

Work in progress

Still exhausted and doing no writing, I’ve been working eight hours a day on the shed. It’s coming along.

Slowly, a lot slower than I’d like, but I’m getting there. These jobs always take far longer and cost far more than planned, and the shed is no exception.

The photo is where I was yesterday morning. Today, the whole interior – walls, ceilings, and even the z-framed timber door, have polystyrene insulation. It’s not beautiful. I patchworked a lot of odd size pieces together to reduce the amount of wastage. But it should be functional, especially when I add a layer of foil over the top, which I hope will seal all the gaps well enough.

I don’t know how my husband worked in the shed when it was his computer workshop. He must have frozen his butt off in winter and barbecued it in summer. I grew up in Australia. Heat I’m okay with, but my cold tolerance is minimal. I normally wear three layers of thermal underwear under my clothes, and fingerless gloves inside our house in the British winter, so a freezing drafty shed is not doing to do it for me. Insulation is more important than how it looks!

I’m hoping I can achieve both a comfortable and an attractive writing space though.

Next comes the foil, and taping all the gaps in that, then I’ll staple up a tented ceiling from an old white sheet. Don’t want to risk anything heavier on the ceiling, there’s not enough to nail into. It would NOT help my writing to have the ceiling fall on my head! The walls will be light spruce tongue and groove boards.

I’ll need to ensure I fix the leaks, before I start that. There are a couple of broken edges on boards outside that I’ll patch. I’ve put new support under the shed and stopped the water tracking up where it rotted out in that damp corner. I’ve ordered better window perspex, and guttering and a water tank. My lovely husband is painting the outside for me.

Luckily, we finally have summer! No rain at all the last two days. It’s been beautifully sunny and all a British summer day should be, after raining heavily every day so far this month. I hope it stays dry. I won’t get much more done until Thursday now, between the Day Job and visiting the MiL.

The lovely thing about this sort of physical work is that my mind has been free to wander. Yesterday, I came up with a new story idea. It will be fun to write. At last some characters based on my Flying Doctor days I feel happy with! I don’t think they’re romance cliches. It doesn’t feel like it at this stage. I’m looking forward to mining that period of my life. The story needs a lot of development work yet. Mind mapping, and finding out more about who these people are.

But I’m resisting the temptation to chase the bright new shiny. I’ll edit the Christmas story first. I’m almost to the stage where I have enough distance from the writing of it to do the edits justice, and to want to start back into it again. With no words count constraints, I think it will end up around five thousand words longer than the version I submitted. I’ll address the issues the editor pointed out in the rejection. The choppy jerky writing and the lack of clarity, product of cutting too much to get word count within limits.

I know it will take a lot of work, and I’m looking forward to that!


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The writing shed, day 2. And another writing decision.


Photo by timsnell

I’m exhausted, and I’ve done no writing today. Lots of thinking.

I worked in the shed all day today. Doing work I hadn’t planned on, caulking all the gaps between every single board, between the walls and the floor and the walls and the roof, down the corners where the wall panels meet, and that 10mm (3/8″) gap under the windows the wind howled through. It took three tubes of gap filler! Worth it, I think, even though time-consuming. It should make a big difference to how weatherproof the shed is. I didn’t take any photos as there are only so many photos of an empty shed anyone will want to see. Just imagine three huge tubes worth of white lines across the last photo!

I’ll be back at the Day Job tomorrow, but Thursday I can start putting up the foam insulation panels.

And hopefully start work on the rewrite of the Christmas story.

I’ve been thinking about it all day. I’m glad I left it a few more days to start. I need that extra distance. before I change anything.

Though I’ve made a big decision. I’m going for an idea I had early on in the development phase of the story, and was strongly tempted by but ultimately rejected as less suited for the particular Call for Submissions I wrote the story for. I’m making the hero and heroine much older. Late fifties or even early sixties instead of twenties.

It works far better for me that way. I just like it. I think it will add more poignancy, too.

It will mean more of a total rewrite. It also means it won’t really be a category type romance any more. It will be a feel-good Christmas story that also happens to be a love story with a happy ever after. So I’ve pondered the differences between single title and category romance.

How to know- this idea is category, this idea is single title? What’s the dividing line between category-style romance, an ST romance, and an ST with strong romantic elements? How does the  writer’s mindset need to change when approaching the story?

I’m guessing it’s the tropes, the focus on the relationship, the need for secondary characters, just how big a canvas the story needs to be told the way the calls for. Discussion with my CPs suggest that ST can get away with more humour, less of a black moment.  Many of the romantic ST’s I’ve read have been fairly light and fluffy, a kind of grey moment and not the real black BM needed for category. More feel-goodish. But there still needs to be some sort of ”all is lost” moment, or there’s no story. The sh*t hits the fan moment (the nursing meaning of BM!).

So, I’ll be writing the story as a single title, with older protagonist. It will be unsaleable, of course, but at least it will be unsaleable as the story I wanted to write, not the story I thought I ought to write!

A lesson I need to learn.

Still waiting to do the post on my CP’s wonderful debut. Launch is delayed a couple of days. My next post… fingers crossed.

Oh, and the photo has no relevance at all to the post! I couldn’t find one I liked that did, and I love this one.


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Working on the writing shed, anticipation, and a new plan

So I haven’t done any writing, since submitting the Christmas story. I played with some ideas for the next story, and know which one I want to go with, but haven’t done anything more than note down a few ideas..

It feels strange not to be writing. I’m restless and antsy.

That’s good. When I start back into writing again, I’ll be raring to go. I’m using that energy getting a lot of other stuff done, all that decluttering and sorting out stuff I don’t usually have the time or the oomph for. It shows just how much energy writing uses. Those last few days working on the story I ended each day exhausted. And how much energy the Day Job sucked out of me. I’ve achieved more in the last two weeks since dropping back to part time hours there than I did in the preceding two months or more!

Today, the big job was clearing the shed, ready to start the fixing up work on Tuesday. I’d hoped to start sooner, but today is the first day it hasn’t rained, and I’ve been waiting for supplies to arrive. Anyway, we got it empty, and I got an unpleasant surprise. One corner has rot. The whole side wall was mouldy where something was leaned against it, trapping moisture  that never dried out as it’s the shady side. And the supporting timber under the corner has rotted right out, letting that corner get damp.

So that meant a lovely few hours scrubbing the entire wall with bleach. Three times!

Luckily, now it’s clean and drying out, it’s only a tiny patch of the floor that’s soft. I’m hoping I can just fix the underfloor support and the damp issue and get away with it. Because fixing it properly by replacing that floorboard would mean dismantling the entire shed, and that is NOT going to happen. The other surprise is a patch of what looks and smells like engine oil on the floor, but that’s not a big deal.

It’s also been a day of anticipation.

It’s release day, for one of my CPs., Robyn Thomas  Her first book, “His Unexpected Family”, a contemporary romance with a thrill-seeker mountain climber hero and a newly bereaved mother heroine.  Tagline- ”Family may be the biggest adventure of them all.” It’s a wonderful story, tenderly emotional yet sexy too. I adore her voice and can’t wait to read her final edited version. If that story sounds like something you’d enjoy, come back tomorrow for some cover love and a link! We’re all desperately waiting for it to go live on Amazon so we can buy copies. Clicking and fricking, as Jilly says, hitting refresh constantly on the search box and getting nothing. Grrr!

So I’ve made a decision on what to write next, too. Rather than dive into the rewrite of the last story, I’ll wait a couple more days, then edit Believe in Me again. Let it be the length it needs to be to tell the story best. I suspect that will be around 20k, maybe a little longer. I’ll sub it out to some other publishers who might take a Christmas romance novella. I’m thinking Samhain, Ellora’s Cave Blush, and Grand Central’s Forever. Maybe Carina.  If I work on the other story first, it’ll be way too late to sub a Christmas story by the time it’s edited up.

I’ll combine working on the shed with editing fours or five hours a day, so I don’t get burned out on either job. By mid-August at the latest, I’ll have a finished writing space, and a story that’s really ready to go, not rushed to meet a deadline and mangled to meet a word count.

If I can get it out again within a few weeks, a month tops, I’ll still have time to self-publish if they all reject it.

Though that depends on the reason for rejections. If I get form rejections, or rejections with criticisms, I need to reconsider. Maybe the story isn’t as good as I think it is. I don’t want to put it out there if it’s truly not good enough for publication. Of course, some epubs, like Carina don’t give encouraging comments on R’s. Nothing in between form rejections and revise/resubmits.

If I consistently get the sort of r’s that are along the lines of they liked it, but it’s just not what they are looking for in their Christmas list, then self-pubbing is the way to go. Of course, those sort of R’s may just be a politer way of saying it’s still not good enough! I’m sure most editors would find space for a sensationally good story, even if it didn’t quite fit that month’s list.

Maybe I can start working on the story tomorrow. Take it on the train to read and annotate. I’ll know if it’s too soon to start edits, if I can’t see anything wrong with it! If I can see the issues that need fixing, and I’m pretty sure I will as I knew before I even subbed the thing, it’s time to start the next round of edits. Put back in some of what I took out. Add what’s needed for readability, flow, and reader understanding.

Then it’s time to take a deep breath and hit send again.

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